yayman223's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Can You Feel the Beat Tonight]

Great Job

I think uve gone to a higher level than most musicians including myself so I won't hold anything back.

My opinion its a little fast and some of the notes in the song are a are a little off compared to the original . Some of the notes didn't jump out at me as well cuz they were a little fast and quiet so U might want to make the lead a little louder in parts.

Either make it louder or slower so the song captures you like Elton John intended it to be

As I said, Im only rating u hard cuz I think u got what it takes to get urself known on this site and maybe other sites. U get 10, 5, and on my favs list

Keep it up bb

ScottyKnows responds:

Yeah... Tempo was hard to work with, because I wanted to keep it upbeat, without ruining the melody. Balance was tough, too.

But thanks a lot for your support and confidence! I really appreciate it!

[Ashes to Dust]

cant hear the vocals

ur bass is way to strong I cant understand what the lyrics are. Increase the decibles
on the vocals and decrease on the guitar. Get a balance.

[Blvd. of Broken Dreams (cover)]

little choppy

u have a good voice but ur guitar was a little choppy at parts in the strumming where u weren't sure which direction u wanted to strum. Also the sound would fluctuate a bit (loud to quiet) then sometimes it would just stop. Did u record this in sections?

Either way u did an okay job but I would try doing one solid recording without stopping.

I hope to see more from u though :)

firebanesword responds:

Thanks for the compliments.
As for the stopping and starting sporadically, I am still learning guitar. I only got my guitar a week ago. So that accounts for the breaks.
No, I didn't record it in sections, but I can see why you think that.

[Laugh At Fat Man]

Yes

I love this guitar playing. Can I use it in a movie Im might be making? It will be going on utube and I will give u credit 4 the song of course.

Lawrie2 responds:

yes of course thatd be great

[Raining in Tokyo]

mostly good

u r a little choppy in places where the tracks change a little to quickly. Id also leave out the news man at the begining, not because its bad but it detracts from the mood.

[Coconut Ghost]

emo song

awesome music but the lyrics make u sound emo. i respect ur opinoion but this is mine.

d-z responds:

It's about a real ghost, the static when the song starts is the ghost trying to communicate. Thanks for your opinion though.

[Goofy Man]

Catchy

I like this song. I don't know y but I do. Now it will be in my head 4 ever

Dragproductions responds:

Cuz, lol it's a great song!

[I Like Cookies]

YAY

I love cookies. fix the pause at the end

[*- Tuck Everlasting -*]

add more

i know ur just trying to remake a soundtrack from an okay movie but this has potential to become awseome and urs. A a few acoompanyment tracks, mabye a lead guitar, some solos and u have a rocking song. Let me know if u decide to do that

:)

Jebbal responds:

Yeppp, I'm thinking I want to keep going with this. I actually didn't know that the melody was from the movie until a few minutes ago, so that was kinda shocking to me. :P

I'll build off of this and add other stuff to it that's not in the movie, I already have some ideas!

Thanks for the review, and try not to get killed by the flying fook monkeys following you right now.

[Hip-hop Meltdown]

Rockilishious

just give it a name and ull be set

Ric-Olzow responds:

hip-hop meltdown. I'm set. =D