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warning 4 ur work

i used to only use midis 4 making orchestraded mixes of songs. Now I cant tell 4 sure but did u add anything 2 the song cuz newgrounds wont tolerate just changing instuments, if they find u theyre pretty serious when they say 'take down the song or we delete ur account. U hafta make sure ur changes stand out or explain them in ur description of the song. But i will give u big points becuz it does sound cool.

Just thought u should know :)

BowserThedestructive responds:

No warning Damnit i told you and everone has well has i am known has i ORCHESTRATE MIDI= SONGS NOTES IT NOT A STUPID MIDI its the note for that MIDI.. complicated And "ORCHESTRATING A SONG" isnt just replacing instruments I do more then that and the so called standout this song does alot if you heared the orignal Youd know what i freaking mean. All of my orchestras are standouts one for once the choirs were not present in the orignal ill do more info on them in the next ones -_- the whole concept of you what said angers me >_> "all of my work is orchestrals" of songs that are cool sounding all my work directs to VG music all midi i get are from vgmusic Dot com. THINk before you review >_> :D
Screw half of what i said any who Dispite what ng says they have never notified by me has i do add on notes on certains songs that didnt contain any i add on abit but for the way i do things i am going for an orchestral jazz depending on the song to feel like its beeing orchestrated Live. for any of the tunes i like :D

believe it or not...

i can see where beaninacan is coming from 4 pokemon. It does have that epic walking down route 201 feel to it that u might here in pokemon for a pointless walking montage. The synths are what remind me of it, the bass kind of reminds me to. Would I want to see this in pokemon HELL NO (no song ever made deserves that cruel twisted punishment)

But besides all that I love this song, i feel so chill after listening to it

Keep up the Great work and hope to see more on the front page :)

shadowmana responds:

Yeah, Pokemon would kinda be a step backwards for this, but thanks for the concern!

Glad I could relax you.

i kind of agree with carf

i can definetly see that u spent some time on this. Honestly i dont think u need to change to much with this. Still take his advice at learning how to bring more to ur tracks but i think what u need to learn for this song his how to balance levels of tracks in volume and in what speakers they come out of to make the song feel more full than it already is.

Keep up the good work though :)

P.S I forgot, do fix that high note track, it does sting the ears a little.

Take out the vocals

1. There annoying
2. The background noise of the mic is visable.

If u took those out this would get a ten in no time

ToxicTom responds:

yeah whatever just buy me a new mike

i actually know what u mean

i honestly dont really know what score 2 give u. It flows but u dont know if u like that flow or not. Im giving 8 here but 5 on the vote cuz im confuzled :S

buyj3llo responds:

Wow, I feel like we understand each other (no homo).

arguing instuments

1. u need 2 go back to that intro and find some agreeing instuments (the electric guitar completly startled me)

2. To random, u have like 5 different songs in this one and the mood keeps changing. Stick 2 1 idea and work on that

piggy123 responds:

ok i will

ur not just a good reviewer

i decided to come check out ur songs cuz u usually review songs right before i review them.

ur not just a good reviewer u also know how to put a good piece of music together 2. I feel like im just walking down a field in a marry, over cartoonish jog.

Keep it Up :) ur in my fav rtists already

Cruston responds:

Thank you very much, I make all my music myself with a keyboard. I like reviewing music cause it helps artists improve

GHOSTBUSTERS

wait no its not................

now back 2 reality, this is actually pretty good. If i could change 1 thing i might make it slightly less quiet to fit the stealthy feel, but it definetly reminds me of preping 4 a mission. But hey thats just my cents, u still did a good job on this song and i cant wait 4 the full version :)

DJ-Draken responds:

Much appreciated. I can see what you mean by the Ghostbusters comment a little, and the mission briefing. It definitely has a sort of menu-ish feel or something. There'll be more too it when I actually put some decent time into it. I've only spent about an hour on it.

Anyways, thanks for the review.

im not sure

somethin isnt right but i cant quite put my finger on what it is. It might be the lvs of ur midi arent right and some of the instuments r a little louder than they should be (like the tanborine) if that doesnt work maybe the tempo is off on an instument or the whole song. Theres just something distracting about it. Ill pm if i figure out what it is, or maybe im just tired. Sorry about this kind of useless review.

BowserThedestructive responds:

-_- none are off but then again no midi i use can be perfect unless its composed by the orignal author who made the song... but most i use are pretty well made. but the instruments i use i delete parts of the orignal midi data i sometimes keep its tempo data but on this one i deleted some of its pan issues and made it stereo and fixed some notes lvl trieing best for a real feel

I have to agree with Cruston

this doesnt remind me of pokemon cuz there arent any beats that i can pick out that are in pokemon. The song u remixed isnt in Pokemon...BUT IT SHOULD BE!! cuz this is a super special awesome song. The creators of pokemon should buy this song off of u dude :)

P.S sorry about the the lame begining of this review. I just wanted to say BUT IT SHOULD BE!! :)

Jebbal responds:

The song I remixed IS TO in Pokemon! Take a listen to the album called 2. B. A. Master or something like that. Its in there! Its super special awesome!

Thanks for the review!

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