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gtg with this one

its more.........holy if u catch my drift, the heavy beat in the other one i dont think fit the monkish feel like this one. U may want 2 think about making a new begining 4 both though, ones that fit the rest of the song more than they do now. Maybe slowing the begining down a bit on this one to match the tempo a little more 2 the guitar(not match but close) to get that ambient feel. So far its good but not as good as some of ur earlier work. (Laugh at the Fat Man will always be my fav of urs)

O GOD NO

from a production point of view this is good. But from a person who has been haunted by this song in there youth and has been scared by this song, I HATE IT (assumes feedle position)

10/10 for production
-100000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000/10 for song choice (starts sucking thumb)

sonicmega responds:

If this scared you into the fetal position, the Hoenn Rap will officially cause you to withdraw into the darkest reaches of the nearest closet, never to face humanity again.

Still, thank you for the kind words on the production part!

WHOA

wat version of fl r u using, i have 5 producers edition and i dont have awesome sounds like that

L3WIS responds:

FL Studio 7. I used 3xOsc.

Thanks for the review.

Genius

this is really good, i wouldnt be surprised if this made the the top song of the week. A Great remix 2 a great song, u could have rewrote the chourus and the bridge but u still went beyond the call of duty

YES

UR MY HERO :)

just wanted 2 let u know

i enjoyed this song.

YES

THIS IS THE GREAYEST SONG EVER. The one issue i have with this song is that u get into the lyrics 2 fast i we dont know wat ur saying till we read the lyrics. I think have a little longer intro so we can take in what were listening 2 easier. Even just like a 5-7 second intro will allow us to appretiate Chuck even more than right now.

P.S the only person who doesnt need the intro is Chuck Norris, HES THE INTRO TO EVERY SONG :)

astroninja responds:

AGREED CHUCK NORRIS IS THE INTRO OF EVERY SONG, EVERY POEM, EVERY PLAY, EVERY MOVIE!

We wanted the intro to hit fast and quick because we had to at least ATTEMPT to avoid CHUCK NORRIS' almighty ROUNDHOUSE KICK. Sing or play too long and he would have jabbered us with his jabs before we got started. 2 minutes, quick and with enough time to run from CHUCK NORRIS for a single step, and that's only because he allowed us to get away with that one step. otherwise he could have chopped us in two with just his mind

WALKER TEXAS RANGER = AWESOME!

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......................................what?

the name totally lost me but its a kick ass song, i give u 10 and 5

i disagree with leaderoffheidiots

hes right as it could have been more exciting but I think u changed it enough to avoid blams because u added the guitar in there. U can have the main song as the foreground melody and no one should have an issue with u as long as you add to it which u did.

Just add a few more tracks and ull have an awesome song :)

newrounds1 responds:

aah i see okey thx well i uninstalled FL studio becuz of some probs here but maybe i reinstall it some time and do the track better

cool sounds but overall

could have been quicker to get in to I fast foward it for about a minute to find a part i liked. The beat i find is a little different in places to. I think if you didnt have such a long intro I would have felt the song quicker and njoyed it more. But thats just my opinion

snayk responds:

Personally, I really like the intro, but I tend to lean towards creating longer introductions which other people disagree with. The beat is supposed to be different in places (I didn't want just the same beat all the way through).

Thanks for the review!

Making Movies since the begining of time......yesterday =3

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